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Jacob's avatar

this is absolutely astounding! the imagery alone is intensely moving. but you manage to write it in a way that flawlessly immerses the reader. bravo

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Ariadne Pautina's avatar

Thank you so much! 🖤 Your kind words are deeply appreciated.

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Gillian Fletcher's avatar

Jeffrey would be pleased—captivating!

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Ariadne Pautina's avatar

Thank you so much! 🖤

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Nocturnal Narrator's avatar

WOWOWOWOWOW. This was SO freaking good!

1) The Void accepts your offering.

2) I am in love with the way that you use reading tempo to heighten suspension. It's like the way that they use audio in movies. 12/10.

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Ariadne Pautina's avatar

Thank you so much! 🖤 I really appreciate your kind words, and also the opportunity to share… the prompt was perfect!

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Nocturnal Narrator's avatar

I appreciate you joining in on the fun! And, wow, I had to go back to the top and read it again. I just cannot get over how beautifully it reads.

Good luck! Not that you need it. 🖤

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Ariadne Pautina's avatar

This means so much. Thank you 🖤

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