Just read this. Your writing is cinematic. The movement from the shopping mall, eerie and abandoned, to the kids in the car was perfect. I saw it like a camera spinning round them both as he comes to a disturbing realisation. And then I realise what he was actually doing in the car and think this is genius!
Since reading last week, I have regularly come back to read snips of the prose. Each paragraph feels so intentional and hand-crafted and rich. Each one a cosm of exploration. Truly a wonderful read. Thank you for sharing it with us, Ariadne.
Just read this. Your writing is cinematic. The movement from the shopping mall, eerie and abandoned, to the kids in the car was perfect. I saw it like a camera spinning round them both as he comes to a disturbing realisation. And then I realise what he was actually doing in the car and think this is genius!
Thank you so much! 🖤
Your writing is so good! I hope the void liked your offering, but I know I did! Keep writing, fellow writer!
Thank you so much for your kind words! 🖤
Since reading last week, I have regularly come back to read snips of the prose. Each paragraph feels so intentional and hand-crafted and rich. Each one a cosm of exploration. Truly a wonderful read. Thank you for sharing it with us, Ariadne.
Thank YOU for your kind words! 🖤
I so appreciate you taking the time to read, to comment… thank you.
Phenomenal, mind-bending piece of fiction. Unexpected and staggeringly visceral. Moving. All the adjectives. Consider the Void satiated.
Thank you! I so appreciate your commendation 🖤
I can’t speak for Jeffrey, but I think this offering should please the void!
Thank you! It is important to keep the Void pleased! 🖤
Holy. Shit. This was OUTSTANDING! I have chills!
Thank you so much! 🖤
I owe it all to Lara being so… Lara.